Saturday, October 22, 2011

More adventures of Grievous

Quite a while back, I posted my youngest's earliest Star Wars writings. He's still writing Star Wars books, and here is an excerpt from his latest, The Revenge of Grievous:

A long time ago in a galaxy far away there was a cyoborg who ruled an army of millions of thasands of droids.

He was evil and his name is Grievous! He was ploting to dortroy a army called the Rebel Alliance and they were good! He was a comander.

Obi-one Kenobi a Rebel was trying to kill him! But a wepon called a Lightsaber, well Obi-one only had one and Grievous had foar! Obi-One had no cance of wining the Battle!!!!!!!!

My favorite part is the eight exclamation points at the end. I just find that totally adorable for some reason.

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