Editing

I spent the morning cleaning up Farthest Space. There were only four marks from the editor (mostly paring things like "heaving a long sigh" down to "sighing"). There were several comments from DH that required a bit of rewriting. And as I read through it myself, I noticed quite a few errors in logic (the most glaring of which was the fact that I got confused about military time and wrote 0800 when I meant 2000... and no one noticed, not even DH! Aaaaarghhh!). I think I have everything straightened out, but I'm going to read through it once more this afternoon, just to be on the safe side.