Working at last

Today I finally got started revising UNICORN QUEST. So far most of what I've done is minor edits (correcting word usage, adding a sentence here and there to clarify, and generally making sure our two writing styles mesh). I'm looking for places where the story can be expanded, and I'll tackle writing a new scene or two tomorrow. There are a few places where we skipped over too much action (since we were trying to keep it short), and they can probably be expanded fairly readily. Otherwise it's really quite good. My co-author really has a way with description-- some of her descriptive phrases are incredibly evocative and simply gorgeous. I think I'm envious:-).