Wednesday, August 3, 2011

Revision

My friend Jody was nice enough to look over Seeing Spots and beta it for me. Following her advice, I added a new first chapter which has more dialogue and less introspective, internal monologue-y stuff-- more showing and less telling, in other words. I think it flows much better now. I've been playing around with it all day, and will probably take a break soon, and get back to it later. Still, I'm very happy with how much I've accomplished on it today.

2 comments:

  1. Some friend, making you work like that!

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  2. Well, making me do work I need to do is definitely a good thing:-).

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