DH continues to critique NEVER LOVE A STRANGER every evening. He's now up to page 200. None of his comments have required major rewrites, but he has pointed out several substantial logical flaws in the story, which I've fixed. I will never...write...a time travel...again...as long...as I live. Trying to make the plot hang together without paradoxes is enough to make my brain spin. Good thing I have DH!
In other news, the unicorn fantasy I'm writing with another author as a free story for NCP's birthday bash was returned to me yesterday. She added 3000 words, and they're excellent. It's becoming a very interesting story!